Okay...
Hey fella,
I am not trying to be an asshole on purpose and there seem to be people who enjoy your animations, but I just can't see how. You barely ever animate anything and just move badly drawn objects across the screen by tweening. There is no story or anything, you didn't put any effort in this. It is just that generic anime stuff everyone copies and dumps on the internet.
Try harder!
Again, I am not trying to flame, this is my opinion.
Cheers,
Hildebrandt
It's okay if you dislike my style, everyone has different opinion after all,
thanks.
fuck XD
I actually hate everything involving pokemon,
But the idea of tying two creatures AND A PIECE OF SHIT together...
Why did he use SHIT? XD AWESOME!
Cheers
hahaha well sh*te was the only available resource at the time...think of the awkwardness...
Love it!
Man,
It is SO refreshing to see something like that right here! I am always nagging about people repeating themselves, copying shit and boring the hell out of their viewers (even I do that...), but this is something fresh.
Good work :)
Cheers!
Wow, well that happens a lot on this site, i'm glad you find it FRESH! ;)
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The Flash is alright I guess, The graphics could be better, but all in all... nice job!
Nvertheless, in my opinion, being the last man on earth would be SO awesome... I would be able to take a shit everywhere. No matter where. Outside. On times square. In your sister's room. The possibilities are endless.
Think about it...!
That's it, the possibillities aren't endless. And once they have come to an end what are you going to do?
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Sorry, that just doesnÄt work for me...
The story and the dialogue are kinda lame ("wtf"/"lol"= epic dialogue!), so is the animation. Maybe it would help to spend a little more time on the animation. Cheers.
it's okay if you doesnt like my style. Thanks for the review though
What the fuck, man?
The second world war was anything but funny , especially at the east front. It is out of taste and proves immaturity to make a fucking madness clip out of this. (Oh, by the way, why does everyone copy that bullshit? I've seen enough.)
Grow up.
It is not meant to be funny,
Cool!
Jesus christ, I love your animation! Why the low score?
Maybe you should have included some pictures of Mario or Sonic or some anime shit at the end so that the kiddies would have liked it...
I simply love it, the only thing you could have done better is increasing the contrast (but I can guess that if you really drew this by hand/ with a pencil, it would have been even more work...)
If you have the time, email me how you did the animation.
Thx,
H.
I'll just tell ya here. I drew every frame on paper with a light box. Painted some frames in watercolour and colourd some in in pen and then I just scanned every drawing in in sequence and put them togather in flash. Exported it all as a movie and then re-imported the video into flash.
hrm.
Generally, this was okay- That thief sure is one stupid douche...
I think you should try improving your animation skill (the walking thief at the beginning was done pretty good!). Also, try to improve the drawing (I know, it's a pain in the ass when you gotta draw everything over and over again... but in the end, it's quite rewarding).
Cheers
Thanks :D
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I am not very fond of your flash, sorry... too short, too corny...
A few hints-
1.: Practice animating walking cycles (it's a pain in the ass, but you'll need 'em all the time)
2.: Practice drawing
3.: Use less tweens (Frame by frame stuff takes long, but it looks cooler. Most times.)
Cheers
This Is Really Useful Crit, Thank You.
Yeah The Walking Animations Were Kinda Bad But I Didn't Worry About It Too Much At The Time Because They Wern't On Show To Much, But Thats No Excuse I Shall Definatly Work On That, The Drawing Can Obviously Be Improved But I Don't Think It Was Too Bad Kind Of Gives It A Certain Style, Just Needs Tuning Up!
And There Wasnt Actuall Too Many Tweens Just For Movement Across The Page And The Apple Falling, I Did Use Frame By Frame (poorly i admit) For A Few Things, But Again It Stands To Be Worked On, But I'll Get On That For The Next Project!
Thank You For Watching And Your Crit =]
Simsalabim
Ich habe die Kraft, vernichtende Reviews für schlechte Flashfilme aus billigen Sprites zu schreiben!
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